The dawning sun, a cliche for sure, but its a transcendent metaphor. I cannot imagine dawn inspiring fear. The sun drips up onto the local stretch, imminent and steady in its creep. I think rather the punchy stab of a lightning bolt is better. Lightning, strangely, is not incredibly scary. A streak flashes from heaven to horizon and provokes an awesome smile, quickly replaced by a brace for the inevitable thunder. Our household, to say the least, has seen a flash of lightning. Flashes of our son’s birth, finishing my Masters, elicit grins, which fade like dark at dawn, replaced by the imminent and steady creep of fear of the unknown. It is thrilling and I cannot wait to capture with words whatever fills these mysterious gaps. In the meantime, please feel free to check out two new papers I added.
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